How to Eliminate Static Verbs

Static verbs are a plague on wannabe writers, academics and college freshmen. Correction: static verbs "plague" these writers. Verbs like "to be" or "to go" function like conceptual crutches, forcing the reader to hobble over tiresome hurdles like "have been" or "went" before reaching the subject's vital verb. Static verbs, also known as stative verbs, express a state of being rather than a dynamic action. For instance, the ironic noun "verb" in the first sentence is described as being a plague, rather than simply plaguing writers. As Constance Hale, author of "Sin & Syntax" observes, "static verbs lack punch." Although you cannot wholly banish them from your writing, replacing a majority of them lends vitality to otherwise dead writing: a perk for cover letters, essays and all forms of writing.

Things You'll Need

  • Highlighter
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Instructions

  1. Identify

    • 1

      Highlight all the static verbs in your sample. Remember, they can exist in different forms and tenses, such as: "is," "are," "were," "was" or "will be." Examples of common static verbs are forms of: "to be," "to do," "to seem," "to appear" or any verb that describes one of the five senses.

    • 2

      Transfer a simple sentence containing a static verb to a blank sheet of paper. For instance, "I am a fierce advocate for the rights of the homeless in my work as a public defender."

    • 3

      Cross out the static verb and underline the next noun or noun phrase that appears in the sentence. For instance, "fierce advocate" follows "am" in the first example.

    Eliminate

    • 4

      Translate the noun, if possible, into an active verb. For example, the noun phrase "fierce advocate" can become "fiercely advocate."

    • 5

      Rewrite the sentence to account for changes in verb form, tense or content. One version of the revised sentence may read: "I fiercely advocate for the rights of the homeless in my work as a public defender."

    • 6

      Practice replacing the static verbs in at least three other sentences.

    • 7

      Find and replace as many static verbs as you can in your writing.

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