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Third Grade Writing Lessons on Metaphors & Similes

Similes and metaphors provide imaginative ways to describe the world around you. They work by letting you draw comparisons between two seemingly dissimilar things. A boy and the wind, for instance, do not seem much alike, but a boy can run like the wind. It is a comment on his speed, where saying “like the wind” gives a more vivid picture than merely saying, “he ran quickly.” Teach your children how to write metaphors and similes with practice and creativity.
  1. The Difference

    • Similes contain the words “like” or “as” in them. “He’s as clever as a fox.” “He eats like a horse.” The comparison is clearly explained. A metaphor uses the word “is,” or no word at all to indicate the comparison. “This room is a pigsty.” The comparison here is not explained, but left for the reader to figure out. A simile would have said, “this room is as messy as a pigsty,” or “this room is like a pigsty.” A metaphor just says, “This room is a pigsty,” or “Go clean up your pigsty.”

    Metaphor Practice

    • Have your children write a description of something, like the school, using metaphors. For instance, a long, echoing hallway where students crowd up and down could translate into, “School is a cave where ants swarm.” They will get a kick out of thinking of funny comparisons. This will help them to understand the concept of metaphors even while they are forced to consider descriptions and compare qualities. This encourages analytical as well as creative thinking.

    Simile Practice

    • Repeat the previous exercise, but with similes. Assign a different subject to describe, such as a favorite meal, making it a rule that they have to create a simile for every food mentioned. They could eat a hamburger as juicy as an apple, with cheese like gold and lettuce like grass and ketchup red as blood. It is okay that the similes are silly—the point is to get them thinking about the world in a different way and to imprint the concept of a simile on their minds.

    Write a Book Together

    • Write a book as a class about an experience like a walk through a park, or a topic like the ocean. Use picture books to give them something to describe and encourage the children to come up with simile and metaphors to describe the things in the pictures. Write their comments on the board. Finish by asking the children to draw pictures of the things they have said and put it all together in a book.

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