How to Write a Paragraph With Transition Words

Reading a paragraph that lacks transitions is a little like trying to walk a mile in shoes that are three sizes too small; it's uncomfortable if not downright painful. A well-written paragraph should be unified and cohesive and show a progression of ideas. A competent writer uses transitions to help link these thoughts and ideas gracefully, always mindful that she is telling a story that someone else should not only read, but also comprehend and enjoy. (In writing parlance, this awareness is called being attuned to one's audience.) Sometimes, writers don't use transitions because they don't know how, so what follows below is an invaluable guide to becoming unstuck -- an exercise just as liberating as removing that pair of too-tight shoes.

Instructions

  1. Consider an Example First

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      Read and study a paragraph without transitions to appreciate how awkward, stilted and staccato-like it is. Consider: "Cara is 32 years old. She is a physician. She is passionate about exercise. She practices what she preaches. She works out at lunchtime. She often jogs along Lake Michigan after work. She takes her dog for long walks in the park. She wants her patients to exercise. She finds time and energy for it."

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      React to this paragraph in honest terms. While the paragraph may contain some decent information, it is dull and lifeless, and it requires something of an effort to read it. Transitions provide the "oil" that keep the gears of the paragraph shifting gracefully; this paragraph sorely needs oil.

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      Reading a choppy paragraph is like walking in uncomfortable shoes; it hurts.

      Compare the original with the one that contains transitional words and phrases: "Cara, 32, is a physician who is passionate about exercise. Despite her busy schedule, she practices what she preaches by working out at lunchtime, jogging along Lake Michigan and taking her dog for long walks. In the same way, she wants her patients to commit time every week to exercise. Moreover, she realizes it requires a fundamental commitment of time and energy."

    Words that Build Bridges

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      Create a contrast with transitional words such as: but, still, though, although, even though, despite, however, in contrast, in spite of, nevertheless, on the other hand, instead and yet.

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      Draw a comparison with transitional words such as: likewise, similarly, in the same way and also.

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      Underscore examples with transitional words such as: for example, for instance, in fact, specifically, to wit, after all, indeed and of course.

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      Demonstrate a shift in time with transitional words such as: in the meantime, meanwhile, later, afterward, thereafter, until then, since then, so far, in the past, before, earlier, as long as and as soon as.

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      Signal a sequence with transitional words such as: finally, first, second, third, last, furthermore, moreover, next, still, also, and, and then, consequently, and besides.

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      Choose transitions carefully. They should clarify connections between thoughts and ideas, not create them.

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      Put these transitional words in your "writer's toolbox" for safekeeping; you will put them to good use.

      Be alert to the subtleties in transitions such as "however" and "nonetheless." Both words introduce statements that contrast with what precedes it, but "nevertheless" emphasizes the contrast while "however" tones it down.

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