I can help you assess:
* The overall tone and sentiment: Does it express your feelings authentically and genuinely?
* Imagery and language: Are the words vivid and impactful?
* Structure and rhythm: Is the poem well-structured and does it flow naturally?
* Originality and personal touch: Does it feel unique to your relationship?
Let me know what you're thinking about your poem so far, and I'll do my best to help you make it even better!