How is this poem I wrote for my crush?

Please share the poem you wrote! I'd love to read it and give you my honest feedback. 😊

To help me give you the best possible critique, please let me know:

* What do you want me to focus on? (e.g., rhythm, rhyme, imagery, emotional impact, originality)

* Who is your crush? (e.g., a classmate, coworker, friend)

* What kind of vibe are you going for? (e.g., lighthearted and playful, romantic and passionate, introspective and heartfelt)

I'm excited to see your poem and offer my thoughts!